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I really like this thing. Soft, calm little track you've got here. Sounds like you used a little wawah thingy on it, it sounds a bit... "liquid." :P I prefer when you didn't use chords, it didn't have the same calm, soothing feeling when you did that. Pretty good stuff you've made here, if you did that in one streak then I bow down
Somebody beat you
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Don't lie.
DAMN IT!
waah
now the start was a lot of snare rushes
Lead synth needs to be an octave lower, drums need more character than that cheap trance drums stereotype. I like the meowy high pitched bass synth. Base is bit low. song needs less applause fx.
I like the meowy high pitched bass synth. Vocal fx sound pretty good, melody is catchy.
Pretty good stuff, but quite a bit of stuff I personally don't like
VG-
Sounds like a video game song... all synths and percussion is so incredibly simple and plain, I see no reason for it not to be. (which is not a bad thing in this case) Only bad thing about it is the lack of diversity, it is really a lot of the same stuff going on and on, then again it's so short it doesn't really matter. Make a loop out of this and watch it get featured in a game
whee
that start was funny. Later on it sounded pretty good, though I'm not really a fan of vocals and bass being everything in there. Didn't get all of the lyrics, but the lot I get is pretty entertaining stuff. I don't know, never listen to Hip Hop - Olskhool
Not many people listen to Olskool Hip Hop... They need to! It's a medicine but hey, I really appreciate the review and yeah, most of the lyrics consist of inside jokes and "how many times can I swear within a minute." Still, I am proud of this song. Haha.
who
That flute is so fantastic, I want a piece of that flute
Drones are pretty well done too. Guitar sounds great. Cause that's a guitar right? Well, it sounds pretty damn great. Love the melodies. Strings, great job, nothing more to say.
I think it continues a bit too much in the same way before it hits the choir part. The choir sounds great too. Oboe-sounding thing, great, I'm running out of words to say about the instruments and their melodies! Pretty outstanding pice you have made here- awesome work!
Nice
Love the ambient start of it, a bit time before it starts developing though. I like the effect you have on vocals. Guitar sounds great, drums are too. It has some interesting energy levels, mostly in the last two minutes. Good one
Cool
I like how you mix electronic fx into the rock song. Guitar sounds good, bass is mighty awesome, piano is a good touch too. Don't see anything bad with vocals, not sure if I'm a fan of it though.
A bit much of the same through the song, but apart from that, a pretty damn good song you have here
loller
That notes the arp plays in the start sounds weird much like the arp in my pulse song- either a coincidence or something else. O who? only guy I can think of there is ocon but he doesn't need to learn the basics at all... This is from the first second a party track, maybe even a bit happy for that, gotta be something trippin' with mushrooms n shite
Percussion has some nice effect... can't hear if it's phaser, chorus or flange. Anyways, it makes the percussion sound a tad thin, nothing big though. Now add delay and you'll have a serious ambient influence to it :P
Lead sounds pretty good, much more filled and less thin than last time now. You made it... poly?
Cause I hear a lead melody and a baseline at the same time with very similar synths. If you did- that's an original touch!
Evolves into a massive party feeling, actually incredibly well done structure, it has these up and down energy levels with a climax in the middle... that's great. Only thing is the ending, which is just a fade-out
Great stuff as usual, now why don't you just tell me who the other guy is
The arp's probably a coincidence - my friend was the one who made the original bassline we started with and built on and I don't think he's ever listened to your song. Nope, he's not OCON. ;) Unfortunately that last sentence in the first paragraph makes nearly no sense to me. "This is from the first second a party track..." What?! XD
It's a phaser.
Yep, what you're describing is pretty much what we did - and the low part is actually played by the same synth. Glad you like it. :)
Incredibly well-done structure? Well, I wouldn't go that far... :P Honestly I find it to be pretty basic. Yeah, the ending's a fadeout - remember that my friend's a beginner with FL Studio... I didn't want to try to teach too much at once, I had already gone over so much. :P Though in our next collab I'll make it a big point to have a good ending.
As usual. :D
I already said, he's a friend of mine. :P Not going to say much else. Thanks for the review, SBB, glad you like it. :)
gaga
This loop is incredibly much better done than all of the others, simply because the drums are somewhat put in a rhytmic pattern
Plus it has a bit more fill like that piano
still it has a long way to go before it's great
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