Buoy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Better World]

FART JOKE

Why did you put up a big fart in the beginning... it just makes the whle song sound a bit lameish... Well, the whole song is not so much though, it´s rather short, either way... BUT, you have put a lot of new synths, instruments and drums into it, which I really like.

So you added it to the New Wave section, eh? Hmm... god choice. There´s not a lot there, and what I´ve heard from there sound pretty good... including this.

I wish you kept up the beginning style, because I loved it (NOT INCLUDED THE FUCKING FART) and if you´d kept that up, it´s be an awesome track. But the short synth had a somewhat off-tone melody, and it really didn´t fit very much in the song.

I like sound effects. Not doing effects with the instruments to make them total crap, but rather sound effects (STILL NOT THE FUCKING FART) like the quicksilver effect and far-awaty alarm. It adds spice into the song. Good done.

Err... it´s very short, I must say it again, you could need to make it loonger, and if you toke away the fart, added more countermelodies, not neccesarily a lot, but a somewhat decent one could have done it really good.

And you haven´t got any drums. That´s not good. You should add them. You don´t even need to make them yourself, most programs have preset drum beats free to use, I´ve done that in a few of my earlier tracks. It gets awesome!

Oh, and for that other review response, everyone can´t be a paragon... yours is better than a lot of other stuff. So keep it up!

Oh, and apropos stuff, check out mine, lol.

[GamersJam]

Whao

Sound like taken out from a video game, except that falling star sound, which spoiled your chances for this coming in any video game... since I doubt any casino (Which ´this could have been MADE for) would like a such sound.

Lol. It´s a like.

[Wai-Wai Octagon]

Wow!

Looking through your old tracks, I see a lot of good, and original tracks from you! Great work on this one! An awesome drum beat which could actually have taken a lot of time, and very diversed too, it´s actually exciting listening!

But I will never understand you titles, though... Wai-Wai octagon, is that an octagon swinging like a pendulum from side to side? Lol.

Ah, nice work RR, I liked this so much that it´s download worthy.
You are one of the best artist I know to make it so perfectly on a beat, it´s impressive. I wish I could do that :(

[Gerahio]

Way better!

This is a very good track! Really! Very good experimental music, could be anything else, this sounds like a proffesional song, with lost souls screaming for help in the deep dark.

Actually, very original compared to your other tracks. I like it when people get out of their original style and make something completely different sounding. Good work RaveR.

[Kommehok]

Hah

Nice claps and beats, good first synth, though it was kinda peaking too much, and it had a lack of melody in it, this actually sounded pretty cool.

These claps are very repetative, so they may not be pleasant to listen too, I believe you should add a lot more into the drum beats than you did on this one.

Also, Your work has a very clear lack of instruments! I´d like to see if there was a lot more synths going at the same time, and some of the tracks you make perfectly fit each other so they could be one bigger song instead of parting them up into small, looping but annoying because they are so short- songs.

But this is great for a first song!

[RR - Lime Light]

H and stuff

Arrgh it´s a damn annoying loop! Grr makes me want to pck something up and throw it at my speakers, lol.
Nah, I need to chill damnit.
But fact is, there are only 2 tracks, so it may sound a bit lameish, also it´s no melody, no diversity, or any of that stuff.
But well.

[CJO:06 Dec. Contest]

´O_O`

Now I at least have no chance winning at all... damn you! Grr.
This sounds awesome, just like if the track was from a video game... and this is a remix of it... and you made it perfectly... and you sold it to the game producers... and they paid a crapload for it... That´s howit eventually could be.

There´s so many different variations of the original song, there is so many nice ways it goes from one to another.

You´ve done awsome work, the only thing tat wasn´t perfect was the originality... this sounds very much like it does from the original.

[SpiritsFree]

Goo

So music wasn´t fun when you started? Well, gongrats on having it fun, then. Really. Hmmm.... I think it was a bit too loud in the beginning, and the nit turned out that it was me who had to turn the volume down! XD Shame on me.

Okay the shakers were a nice addition, too bad the yadded narly nothing to the song. Don´t keep the drums for later songs, they should be use here and now!
Boom tchik-cka boom bang prr-tz drr!

I don´t know, it´s not a too long song, neither is it very filled, I think you could have another synth instead of that synth you provided in the beginning, like a whatever, really, that is not so sharp. I´d prefer a synth lead in it. Or maybe a trancelead? Even a flute would work.

It doesn´t loop particulary well, it seems like it´s supposed to, but it just turns out being kinda cheesy.

You have a low self-esteem when it comes to music, eh?
Actually you´re not that bad. You seem to have talent, but just need some more skill, and you´re gonna be one great artist, really.

DeathRazor responds:

What can i say? 9_9 Thanks for the long review man! I do have a low self-esteem bout music, and well, i get that when i press audio protal, listening to Paragon's music =_= Ill try and follow you advice, im still only learning ^^

[M!D - Boring Loop]

Really.

your title really shows me you joy, and your interest in making music. It shows the effort you put in your songs. It shows how much you care about music. Really much.
</sarcasm>

Well, this was actually not bad, it was good, but I doubt a loop would let me put that much into a review since it´s probably only something about 20 seconds long...

So... I didn´t like the trancebass (combotricomabination!)
But I definatively liked the clear xylophone thingy, which added a dreamy effect into your track.

You could add some countermelodies, an atmosphere pad and a kick-ass drum loop. That´s pretty much all I can think of.

Oh well bye.

[Heaven Scent]

awesome

Really good remix! The start was kinda cheesy though.
Great beats and bass here it kinda boosts my comp sound out.
Well, great work!

(They said mine was so crappy that it was not even ACCEPTED, so I had to make a new one >:-()