Hm... goog
Nice relaxed little track, it`s relaxed but goes straightly forward.
But it`s lack of content needs improvement. You added some really fitting drums in the middle, it beats the song up, but in the other parts, it`s really not so good. Keep the drums going from nearly at the start, but leave a little area in the very beginning alone, that would add much more flavour into your piece.
(And don`t advertise your stuff in threads, though it`ll work>:)
Whoa
I just noticed you use Ableton Live. That may be good if you are really skilled, but most times the results are pure crap.
Okay, but you have had quite good luck, not very with this one, though, you need at least some decent melodies!
The sound from this was great, but the melodies, no no, it`s really spoiling a lot of the track!
Good addition with that spacy synth, it saved the day.
So remember some better melodies, and possibly more intergration to the track.
Gee!
What is this- I didn`t like that beginning at all, sorry. But it gained betterness in the main art, tough it`s wayy to sharp!
My ears, look at them! Better gunna get
èm to hospital soon.
But bah. In the next part it was really empty, and no good at all, then with drums and stuff it got better, but not quite.
You need to lax them synths, man! Also, you should have some better melody. But keep it up.
ohshit
This was great, but you put it in the wrong genre!
Since a lot of this track is 8-bit style, it`s clear that it`s a Video Game track!
But anyways, this was really great, I really LOVE Video Game style tracks like this, you did a great job on this.
If improvements are needed, I`d say you`ll need to get something done in that pause, because it really doesn`t fit.
Gugg
It`s nice, chilled and relaxing. Very nice track, awesome for a lazy scene, yeah.
But there are improvements possible. You could get away that long, beeping noise from one of the synths going most of the time, so it`d be better listening.
Except for that, great job on this.
Wrong file?
Because this is just the same.
Well...
There are two ways of suggesting it added to a Flash, it`s putting keywords in the details flash authors of a special kind would search, and an obvious desperate attempt at someone submitting it to a flash.
This was the last one, sorry. Ah, but the song was OK, but it missed the actual point of the song, diversity. It`s just a little loop and nothing more, so what can I say
hum
Haven`t I heard this before?
Nah really anyways, it`s some stragne stuff you got there, it sounds rather weird. The background drums were cool, but annoying after a while.
That mix of basses and synths in one winstrument was a neat addition, but it was a bit TOO deep, so it really does fuzz the thing up.
But it`s a good track!
Betta hit me back bitch
Stress down man
I missed nearly the whole song BUT. What I didn`t miss was really cool, and we all <3 Denvish so I fifen
MEH
Looks like you`re feeding the trolls, but no really no
It`s quite a nice track, and it`s funny listening.
But whatev.
(PS: I vote zero `cause I`m a bad man :)
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