Well nice!
I liked it quite a lot. It`s a slow and beautiful track.
It begins slowly and relaxed, and continues slowly getting up at it.
Maybe it was a bit too slow, making it boring to wait for the song really catch up.
But at 1:45 or so, you finally release the song, aking it much better.
The flutes shimmer at times, but I don`t know how to prevent that. Maybe lower the scale, but that would be too deep. Or just play it softer.
But I liked this. Nice job!
Ah thank you man for the review
Good enough
I liked it, but why the holy mighty fucking fingering god do you use swedish titles when you are from Japan?
All MIDIs/wavs at NG seems to be less than 10 seconds long, so maybe there are restrictions at either. Either way, the loop mixed well, nice instruments, and a relaxed and smooth melody.
You should really try getting the files into mp3, as it fits the page better.
Nice song anyways!
I'm Swedish, but I lived in Japan (I think I actually moved back to Sweden on the very day you wrote this review). I made this song 4 years ago, but it's nice that somebody would finally write a review for it :) Not that I've been touching any music programs ever since.
Whoa...
I hope this is not a submittion, because you are the admin of this, and can decide this right away.. but since you say Exhibition Piece, I think I`m fine with reviewing it.
Well yea sure it`s frantic. And sure it`s perfect. Or did you make the song fitting this remix.. seems like.
I loved this, and I think those who want to participate in the contest will either get really inspirated or hopeless.
Oh well.
(I`m such a fanatic :)
thanks!
Nice track!
This was awesome, you know it yourself.
Hell of an intro, leads out into a nice ambient sounds collection.
And the following 8-bits were really cool. You have a really good melody. the song is a bit repetative. You could have added more, but you really don`t need to. the 8-bitser is very crushed at times, making it sound horrible. You could choose another instrument instead of it, or pick up a sound cleaner effect to clean the noise out with.
Thanks for the review, and thanks for the tip... Sound cleaner you say??
Glad you liked it :)
Gooch sez
Whoa, here, I see a lot of needs in improvement.
First off, this song was way to slow. You should either play it in the real tempo, or highen the bmp so that it fits.
Also, make sure you play it proper. You just played it straight forward, you must have some breaks! Just see, here is the beat of the first line in the SMB theme separated by commas.
- - -, -- -, -.
You played it like;
- - - --- -.
You may not understand, but you really should.
Also, don`t just play the song! Make variations! A single piano is boring in the first place, but when you just play it halfway decent, it`s no good!
Add instruments! It can be synths, it can be drums, it can be flutes, it can be guitar, it can be whatever! Just make sure the song isn`t really boring!
And only submit it if you would enjoy listening to it KE.
Is that clearer than water??? (lol)
well thanks for the review would you like to help me? cause im trying to get as much help as i can =)
250! YAY!
It`s my 250th review bitch, so I had to assign it to someone I`m sure would respond!
I won`t remix it, sorry, it`s not my style at all, but it`d be fairly easy... It`s very short, but it`s really trippy in that while.
And the melody... it`s really good, I can`t seem to get enough of it either... damn.
So well, I haven`t really any suggestions for improvement on this, maybe make some better drum beats, as it`s fairly empty with just a bass trice in a second and some kind of gong...
But anyways, I`m just brambling to fill up with improvements, which are not really needed, it`s great! I`ll fifen it.
I RESPONDED... 250th, I don't count :P. Well it great that you have been at it so long. To bad, I might have to do it myself, seems I'm better now, I'll be ready for your critsium (your harsh). This melody is like satisfaction, except its got a different tune, so its awesome. So if you get addict to either one, just switch back :P. I'm gunna IMPROVE, but not for you.
So why
So why did you submit it under ambent when it`s really Classical?
Gee, whatever, it`s a good melody, and it seems really like you`ve made this in one track, and if you did then *worship*.
So yeah. I suggest you adding more background effects, as it`S pretty dry and dull with just the piano. And that`s pretty much it. Good work.
i ment to put it in hip hop XD Jk thx
aww...
Don`t you really have 401? Or have you uploaded something new since I saw your 400th?
But anyways, it`s your first, and yet better than anything I could make, I`m just toying with my rangle, yeah you know it`s great.
Beer
Yay
Gongrats on 400 songs and most songs in the AP! Must be great!
Seeing your dates, you must either have a gay amount of songs to upload even before you signed up, or all you do is making tracks all day... yeah.
But this was a great, reaxed tune, Great song, it`s not stressing nor too slow. You`ve got some great instruments in this, and also it`s one of the best choices to put the stuff in, so it fits really well to each others, and it makes a great, complete song. Great work.
(If people have a lot of songs, I always review their first, so prepare)
Hm... goog
Nice relaxed little track, it`s relaxed but goes straightly forward.
But it`s lack of content needs improvement. You added some really fitting drums in the middle, it beats the song up, but in the other parts, it`s really not so good. Keep the drums going from nearly at the start, but leave a little area in the very beginning alone, that would add much more flavour into your piece.
(And don`t advertise your stuff in threads, though it`ll work>:)
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