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I like the way you combined rock and techno. Doing o turned out being a very original and enjoyable track.
Still, I would like to see a lot more into it. It`s a kinda basic track, though. If you added more melody and such into it, then it would be exciting to listen to all the time.
Whoa. Thanks, i always try to have a certain theme for the track. In this one you can guess it. In Akikao i gained inspiration from kinda spooky picture. The Laboratory makes an exeption, i didnt have a theme for it but i wanted to do something that does not sound like the other tracks.
Good
This one was really good.
In the beginning it gave a kinda spooky feel, and the alien voice was a very nice addition.
But I don`t know, it`s kinda clipping. and yeah, the intro was way too long. you could have just fastened that up, but if youy did so it would lose some of it`s dversity. So... I don`t know.
The upbeat art did fit, and it made the whole track more complete. But I would like to see it go slower and steadier upwards in the beat, that would be awesome.
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Nice track, and you have awesome effects.
It was maybe a bit too repetative, and therefore a bit boring. Very nice drums, but they could have been improved.
The bassline was ok, but not the most exciting one out there.
It`s an ok track, but it isn`t the most original one out there.
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It was mass-downloaded, or it`sd be weird if this was downloaded such a lot while the others have like, 1-12 downloads.
It`s a nice track, but it missed the little extra a song needs. It`s ok, but if you had added more diversity, and made it something unique. Different melodies, soundtracks and background would have done it.
Let`s see, if you added a diversed and more complex drum loop, with a faster beat, making the song much more enjoyable. also, if you put some of the tracks tighter together and blur the whole stuff, it would go much smoother.
Having synth leads always makes the song more exciting. If you quit the old overused trancelead, put in a pulsebass-like instrument, Or having a basic hybrid synth like a vox, would make the song less dry and such.
There is always a possibility to make the melody more complex. Adding undermelodies, and/or using the notes doubled, then it seems more upbeats without really being it. If you manage to do this, it would sound awesome.
But if you are using eJay shit for this too, then this would most certainly not work.
HAH
Nice classical.
I think there`s such you can add to, it though it`s classical.
If you want to choose another style, you could add stuff like basslines synths and such, but I´m pretty sure you know that of course ;D
There`s a very nice melody. And you`ve also added a huge room feel into it, which makes it sound like if it was played on a concert or a hall.
Good work yeah!
Well, I -could- add bassline synths, but then it wouldn't be a romantic minature, and therefore wouldn't be 'classical'
ohkkkkk.....
This sounds like someone who`s sick, blabbing out a song to a halfway decent drum.
(OMFG!!!! I`S TOMFULP)
Uh, I mean! AWESOME!
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That`s a nice track!
Really good techno. Makes me want to party.
Fast-paced and action filled.
Uh.. there is like, not very much more to say about it. Maybe you should improve the melody, which was quite off-tone and bland.
Cood work, but well
Classical start for music of yours, a weird, bended trancelead, but this time it fuzzes up, so the clarity gets really harsh.
And it stops after some time, but it`s just the bass going a bit time after this. But you shouldn`t add anything, either, it would just sound confusing. So how about this just being a song.
an improvement I think you should have is removing DJ from your name.
yeah, lol, ummm, the name RaveR is already taken, and I thought that seems Im going to be adding music, I'd put DJ in front of it :P.
Rush?
You shouldn`t make thing in a rush... But this went out quite well, though. It`s pretty basic for a song, but it`s unique too.
Only drums here are clapping, so it may seem a bit dry for it, but since you have such a load of background instrumnets, it turns out being an exciting experience.
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Sweet, sure thing. Don't you think it sounds like a march or soemthing, huh, I think it would be sweet for a flash. :P.
For some reason I really liked this.
I love it when flutes are played right, and if they are played like this, I really love it. The flutes in the start of this were played really good, it`s beyond words. The melody was maybe the best melody to a flute.
After the start, it goes out in a guitaric part, which beats up, in which spoiled some of the enjoyment of this. It didn`t really fit the flute, and could have been done when the flutes were ended.
From there on, it really doesn`t impress me much. The voices, seemingly randomly places, sounds more like beatboxes, and makes it more of a comical matter than doing it better.
The mix thereon was really weird, as the piano put in fits the flute, but the guitar didn`t.
You should slow down the guitar a bit, into the tact of the flute.
If you did so the whole song, and not the start only, it would`ve been MUCH better, as the off-tempo guitar seems like random climpring when the flute is the real matter.
Okay, the voices should have been slower too, and either reverbed or removed. what weird synth is playing these voices? It`s voices, but it sounds more like played on a keyboard, huh.
Thanks for the feedback SBB
yeah well I've spent ages on this and I ended up with this as the result, I really wasn't sure what to do with it once I got it to this stage,
So i've thrown it out here, as I've stated a few times now ;) lol
But thanks to everyone's critique I know where I'm going wrong with this now, and so I will come back to this eventually and mae all the necessary changes
oh as for the voices, they were a soundfont I found, I had a few others which I was umming and erring about using in place of that one, maybe they should have been removed totally!
Well I will note all points made and will re-establish this track at some point
Thanks SBB
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