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Interesting

How about me knowing why you made the voices so fast that nobody gets what they are saying?
Why couldn`t you just have some intelligent people doing your voices and speak real?

Anyways, voices aren`t the thing thing in this Portal, and it`s the music we all care about. It was great, and had some awesome drums and beats work.

The instruments and such fits the melody very well.

But how about removing that semi-bass-like instrument for ultimate power? Like, seeing that only the best of the song comes through, isn`t that ultimate power?

Well, nice loop, I`d like to see more on it though. Great work.

Q

Original

I like the way you combined rock and techno. Doing o turned out being a very original and enjoyable track.
Still, I would like to see a lot more into it. It`s a kinda basic track, though. If you added more melody and such into it, then it would be exciting to listen to all the time.

ErikTheEntertainer responds:

Whoa. Thanks, i always try to have a certain theme for the track. In this one you can guess it. In Akikao i gained inspiration from kinda spooky picture. The Laboratory makes an exeption, i didnt have a theme for it but i wanted to do something that does not sound like the other tracks.

Good

This one was really good.
In the beginning it gave a kinda spooky feel, and the alien voice was a very nice addition.
But I don`t know, it`s kinda clipping. and yeah, the intro was way too long. you could have just fastened that up, but if youy did so it would lose some of it`s dversity. So... I don`t know.
The upbeat art did fit, and it made the whole track more complete. But I would like to see it go slower and steadier upwards in the beat, that would be awesome.

ahuh

Nice track, and you have awesome effects.
It was maybe a bit too repetative, and therefore a bit boring. Very nice drums, but they could have been improved.
The bassline was ok, but not the most exciting one out there.
It`s an ok track, but it isn`t the most original one out there.

Accept Your Defeat

It was mass-downloaded, or it`sd be weird if this was downloaded such a lot while the others have like, 1-12 downloads.

It`s a nice track, but it missed the little extra a song needs. It`s ok, but if you had added more diversity, and made it something unique. Different melodies, soundtracks and background would have done it.

Let`s see, if you added a diversed and more complex drum loop, with a faster beat, making the song much more enjoyable. also, if you put some of the tracks tighter together and blur the whole stuff, it would go much smoother.

Having synth leads always makes the song more exciting. If you quit the old overused trancelead, put in a pulsebass-like instrument, Or having a basic hybrid synth like a vox, would make the song less dry and such.

There is always a possibility to make the melody more complex. Adding undermelodies, and/or using the notes doubled, then it seems more upbeats without really being it. If you manage to do this, it would sound awesome.

But if you are using eJay shit for this too, then this would most certainly not work.

HAH

Nice classical.
I think there`s such you can add to, it though it`s classical.
If you want to choose another style, you could add stuff like basslines synths and such, but I´m pretty sure you know that of course ;D

There`s a very nice melody. And you`ve also added a huge room feel into it, which makes it sound like if it was played on a concert or a hall.

Good work yeah!

Khuskan responds:

Well, I -could- add bassline synths, but then it wouldn't be a romantic minature, and therefore wouldn't be 'classical'

ohkkkkk.....

This sounds like someone who`s sick, blabbing out a song to a halfway decent drum.
(OMFG!!!! I`S TOMFULP)
Uh, I mean! AWESOME!
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That`s a nice track!

Really good techno. Makes me want to party.
Fast-paced and action filled.
Uh.. there is like, not very much more to say about it. Maybe you should improve the melody, which was quite off-tone and bland.

Cood work, but well

Classical start for music of yours, a weird, bended trancelead, but this time it fuzzes up, so the clarity gets really harsh.
And it stops after some time, but it`s just the bass going a bit time after this. But you shouldn`t add anything, either, it would just sound confusing. So how about this just being a song.
an improvement I think you should have is removing DJ from your name.

DJRaveR responds:

yeah, lol, ummm, the name RaveR is already taken, and I thought that seems Im going to be adding music, I'd put DJ in front of it :P.

Rush?

You shouldn`t make thing in a rush... But this went out quite well, though. It`s pretty basic for a song, but it`s unique too.
Only drums here are clapping, so it may seem a bit dry for it, but since you have such a load of background instrumnets, it turns out being an exciting experience.
Also, check out my stuff PLZ

DJRaveR responds:

Sweet, sure thing. Don't you think it sounds like a march or soemthing, huh, I think it would be sweet for a flash. :P.

welcome to bluegrounds :))

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