Buoy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Whistle Hip Hop OldSchool]

Well...

Aren`t your songs just a LITTLE bit too short?
3 notes and an aaaahh? Is that all you can do?
I know it`s a demo but..., that`s a little bit too little.

[Rock On Love]

Yeah

It`s an OK guitar beat, but it`s just a bit shimmering and stuff. Also, you wrote this about the moon? It`s pretty sort and just some tabs, so I don`t know.
Improvements... Calm the guitar, make longer, add lyrics for this one, and yeah.

[You Can't Handle The Truth]

meh...

What can I say... I don`t generally like voices, but when it`s only voices, then it`s really bad.
I don`T know any way to improve this song, since it`s simply a dialog, but you could clean out the noise in the mic and leave it.

[Worship Service]

Nice

I see you`re a loop guy.
I liked your different instruments, they are all trippy, especially the intro instumewnt and lead, which was perfectly balanced, not too low and not shimmering. Great work on that.
The intro was maybe a bit too bended away from the whole song. The short guitar beat was great.
The drum bang in the end fitted an end, but it seemed like you just didn`t have anything to end it with and just *boom*. Done.
Improvement? Maybe take away that boom, so that it loops better.
OR make it a song.

[NeW YoRk bEaT]

Trippy beat

I liked the beat. It was really cool. It sounded destroyed, like a sound clipped into beats and used that way.
You could need to work on this loop. It was cool, but very short, even for a loop, and a bit slow. So your improvements are adding instruments, and making it more melodic.
It`s your own style, so you get for your originality.

[I wish I Could I wish I Would]

Yeah

I rarely, if anytime, review hip-hopz, but here goes.
It`s Midi, so it won`t play over again, so I can`t really remember all of it.
The beginning synth was great, and you worked good on the furthering.
The lyrics were kinda basic, and didn`t really say anything. They`re not really saying anything. But I liked your guitar picking, it added a nice flavour into your song.
Also, the recording was awesome, I heard no clipping!
Improvements, I`d say yes. Make it longer! If there are lyrics in a song, chances are that no Flash author will use it. If no Flash author uses it, then there`s no reason for making it short.
So i`d like to hear a full song, with better and more lyrics, and if you do that, keep it up!
<3 from Review Request Crew

[Kick clap hit]

Nah

It`s just a really short loop of drums. It could fit as a background template, but the drums alone are so empty and poor.
Also it`s really short. You could use some more effort and such in this.
Different patterns and tracks are needed.

BlackPlastic responds:

I think you are mistaken. You gave me a four.

[Quarins Theme]

Didn`t rock my cox0r

At the beginning, I thought; WTF? a 2 seconds loop?
But afterwards it actually manages being a song. A very short song, but fair enough. Ends really abruptly.
It sounds like you`ve made some few bites and put it into a track.
I didn`t like this, but it`s fair enough for a song.
You could drag the few pieces more together, so they sound more like a complete piece.
It`s a trippy melody, but it goes on my nerves at times.

[Destructo Loop]

A little bit fuzzy at times, maybe.

The fuzz there was really loud and the lead was like, insanely loud!
It`s a good audio track, but it ends fairly abrupt. You had good swithces between techniques, and it mixes into a nice audio track.
But, the leads are really loud. You could like to clean them out with some kind of disortion remover.

wizardman responds:

Yeah, the lead was way too looud. It was good when I did it and when I exported it, but apparently somethign hapened in betwee n that and the submission. I tried making it end not abrupt, but oh well. Thanks for the review.

[Jamie Killed Gibbers]

Oww

Man, this synth in the beggining was WAY too high pitched! My ears bleed of that. After that, it calmed down a bit, but I`m still in shock over that beginning!

The voices was nothing but 1 second of nothing.

But I like the riffs, and that other synth.
Could need some imrovement, but it works out, after all.

Sodium-Co responds:

And thanks again! Actually this stuff should no way be on here, I just got Fruity Loops yesterday and this was my first attempt at using it. Ah well!