Uh,
So... is that a real guitar or one of those sampled instruments you usually get with most audio programs? It sure sounds like it's sequenced- mostly because it's clear as hell compared to an average recording, and it hits the 16th notes perfectly, so either you completely quantisized the note sequence of a sampled instrument, or you played a guitar in perfect rhythm with the exact same velocity on every note, with no fret noises or ghost notes at all, which would be very unrealistic- this is not important, forgive my brambling, I'm just curious after seeing your previous response.
This take is mostly sweet- great clarity on the guitar, as well as the bell-y synth and strings, but watch that master volume slider, I'm pretty sure I hear a bunch of clipping spread through the song (Which is a real downer considering how great it'd sound without the clipping- it's easy to fix though, and I recommend you do asap;)
Not much more to say than that. Maybe a little more reverb on the guitar would make it a lot awesomer? Otherwise it's great, and mostly sounds like a completed track. Good work!