niiiiiiiice
nice triangle synth in the start, sounds bouncy- glitch beats doesn't really fit my taste- disorted square synth? a lil far away sounding, but good. Plucky guitar- simple thingy, interesting loop, could like to be an octave or so lower, it sounds annoying that high. Vocals are pretty drowning in the mixage, but I can get a slight idea of what you're saying. Unique lil compostion, can't see much wrong with it except for really small things based on opinions
hey SBB, most of the synth work is done in crystal for this track, infact all of it, theres only two lol. lots of morphing patched together till something comes out that i like.
You don't like the glitch beats? awwwwwwww! im still getting me head round it so there will be a few mistakes once im tighter with it hopefully i can turn you.
The second synth again done in cystal, added the northpole filter to it for the distortion. Yea plucky guitar, simple as you say, you wouldve thought it sounded better an octave down, but that second synth clashed with it, so played it from the 15th fret (g) on the e string and b.
The vocals are meant to be washy, probably whats losing the clarity is the reversed reverb i used. and all i say is 'close you eyes, just leave me be'
anyways i think you like it, just pointing out a few things you werent too happy with, and opinions matter so thanks for the pointers.
pitters
what
what's that thing in the start? sounds like a cheap brass soundfont, cause it's screaming "SAMPLERRRR" loud and clear- if I'm wrong then fuck it
interesting panning thing, a little annoying, but it makes an atmosphere.
The lead guitar sounds like... off tone, a guitar version of someone singing horribly false, get it? Should have some tuning or at least some better notes- the other guitar sounds okay to me, a lil low possibly
nice rolly drums
interesting composition, lollish
Haha. Hooray this finally got a review!
That, in the beginning, would be whatever 'instrument' swells up in the original MIDI.
I'm still working on how I pan and everything mixes together in the end. It's still a lot of Greek to me.
I'm totally digging the review though, thanks mate!
eh
the song sounds good itself but I can't see much of the "Castle Crashers" feeling they call it in it, and it seems to have a terrible compression quality
The toms are interesting, they are pretty djembe sounding. other percussion sounds like they're mashed on a major lot, but it sounds far away.
The sample in the start... I can't understand why it is there, it just sounds stupid there
Loop perfectly, greaet job on that
Flute sounds pretty good, you shoulda changed it up a lil prolleh btw
It's okay but it has some serious flaws that shoulda been fixed first
(did you get offended by my response to your review btw? na it's not serious at all :)
nop...
anways, ty!
nope
it's not silent, it's just a glitch of newgrounds' which mutes the track in browser view. Download it to listen to it
But you just made the song out of preset loops and slices in the cellphone, which is really not what most authors would do as you'rer doing less than half of the work yourself
Well it's a bit messy, not really melodic at all... I dunno meh
for the review
Interesting lil phased piano you got, but I'd really like it much more if you removed the phaser and put some kickass reverb in its place. I like the froggy fx, seems to fit pretty well, but it kinda messes the sound up. Plus the clipping's there for a while. Love your drum progression, drum rolls ftw
Thanks for the review. This is one of my favourite of my own songs. For some reason, I just threw in all the parts a couple of beats apart from each other in the end, I don't know why...
I think the echo and the drums make it sound more complex than it really is.
The drums! A glitched loop in the FPC, I'd love to be able to custom make a rolling loop like that one day =D
Cheers
Yes
I like the disorted leads, they seem to fit pretty well with the punchy bassies and padz. The disortion seems to take a little overhand in the more energetic parts, but that's it for the cons. wtf does the title mean btw.
cheers for the review SBB. Yea the distortion is a string that i've ran through the northpole filter plugin, it is absolutley awesome plugin get you hands on it seriously.
My main concern on this track is the guitar chord, but too much overdrive and too close, but i couldn't get a good balance with it. that opening synth was achieved by using crystals hybrid option, patch a couple of presets together kept morphing em, this is just the very opening of the patch the rest of it sounded horrendous but it works in this tune.
The title as pointed out above means...
Close Your Eyes, Something Nice is About to Happen.
thanks again
pitters
okay
garagebandish pads at first- now it evolves into some more dramatic slow DnB/Trance style track with tons of atmosphere and ambience
Some garbage monophonic synths
Laz0r effects and urban fx then a vgish melody gallery with the same garbage sine monosynths- now for some much better synths and a good sinebass then it ends with the same gb msical fx
Good job, but I felt it wasn't put together too well, it's a lot like many parts of good soongs put together in a half decent attempt
Its always hard to find good synths on Garageband, and even harder to make use of the MIDI drums that come with the program. I used (royalty free) prerecorded drum beats and sound effects from the internet in an effort to make this sound better than electronic music on Garageband should.
I'll be happy with a half decent attempt, at least until I get Fruity Loops or some better program for electronic music.
interesting
I noticed the panning all over the track, which is quite annoying at times. But it sure adds style to the track. The background synth sounds awesome as hellage
Great drums, the vocals could easily sound like a commercial artist's with some better mixing and what do I call it, I don't have words for it rite now.
The downpitching thing later on the track was just weird, not so sure if I liked that
but good stuff
umm
why did you just put together other songs into a half-assed attempt at a 'project'? It's just small bits of other people's tetris remixes faded in and out. Seriously, what the hell? was this that ambitious project you needed to make a thread about?
yes, it is
lol
now all you need is some drums, oldschool synth n shit and you'd have an awesome fun song
really???? i'll see if it'll work!!
haha
i'll PM you or somethin to let you see if your advice really worked!!! mwhaha
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