Nice
Nice, your new name, that is.
This sounds japanese in the start- prolly because of the sitar-like thingywang synth. Dunno if I think that one fits there, doesn't fit the style of the rest of your song really good- and in the main parts of the song the melody is just annoying. Fancy lil filter thing you did with it, it sounded like a normal synth when it was fading in
The pad in back almost sounds like a bongo sweep lol. Nice, gives a very subtle feel and stuff. If you kept working on it with that pad as the main synth you'd almost have a me-style song, lol
Nice sweep, a bit cheesy but the note progression is great. Sounds like you EQ-ed it kinda weird though, or maybe you didn't but I think it'd be good if you filtered away some of the mid-freqs, cause it has that hollow feeling that goes into your nose and back in your throat- which is kind of annoying. Makes good harmony with everything, too bad it's only in there when the tune is at it's messiest
Ok, then there's this trance saw- now it sounds like it's on the playlist for the DJ in the rave party- nothing to comment or add, it sounds good- adds yet another mood to the song
Drums- holy hell they are a damn lot more diverse than in most trance-style songs. Which I like ^_______^. Kick sounds liquid.
The base is almost unhearable, I can only really hear it when I focus on it = MAKE IT LOUDER >:(
Wow you mixed a lot of moods here- almost everything had a different mood- ethnic, ambient soundscape, partyish, victory stuff- you mixed it pretty well. It clashes quite a bit in a while though because of the very different stuff you have in there.
Ok nice. Why not submit the other songs in the series before you continue it? So that people can get the whole thing- a lotta people haven't heard the others
10 for originality since I've never heard such a mix of different stuff before- 9 for clarity- you mastered it great, but the tune sounds messy at places- 9 for diversity since it has a lot more diversity than most tunes, but may get repetitive at times- 10 for effort, bah, wtf do I know about it >:(.
9 overall- it's great, but ain't perfect