heyyo
Fucking awesome ambient/industrial/heavy remake you made of the tune. The atmosphere is damn excellent, HUGE reverb and panning- I'd prefer if you panned something else than the drums- cause they make the atmosphere a bit shuffled (drums are close, everything else is far away- I think that's good for experimental tunes, but not this kind of tunes).
The drums are really the only thing there are problems with- the panning as I said- plus they make the song clip! (I thought it could be disortion, but, well the waveform shows clipping) If you über compress them you'll have two plus-es in one, NO clipping- and fatter, punchier drums. The hat is a bit hi- actually a more ride- I'd like it sound more like a ride cymbal.
Niiiiiiice sine pad you have in the background, it makes a relaxing feeling before the heavier part, and a bit of emotion. Strings add to that feeling but they're damn low in the mix.
Now what's that slide-down lead I hear? If it's a synth lead- then that lead is FRIGGIN AMAZING, but if it's a guitar- then I'm a little ">:/".
Rhode/marimba/xylo synthesis sounds good as usual, but don't go all crazy with the wetness of it ;)
As I said, awesome remake, but it doesn't sound... 100% finished... there's something about how it ends I think... plus there's not a lot of instrumentation.
I was thinking of making a remake of this myself- from scratch. Cause both main melodies are fairly simple to make. And I tell you, mine will sound more ambient than yours >:[