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Has a complete skeleton, but lacks fill

The bass has a good melody with interesting changes and good reverb. Just two things, it begins disorting up a lot after a while, which is not good, and you can hear the clicks in it after a while.

Lead synth has an interesting pitch-up first note, then continues in a generic trance melody, which sounds way cheesy and not enough thought out, but it has a much better style and melody in the second part, which unluckily is when all the disortion comes in.

Then there's the drums, sounds good, catchy beat though it's just the same on and on. A little break or solo woulda done well some times.

It is a good base song, but it lacks filling and elements. There's so much more I could see in this song. Get your mastering fixed and have some more experimenting with it, then this can turn into a guess what

Neon-Crepth responds:

WAY CHEESY!!?? c'mon.... *sigh* jk. i know there are a lot of generic melodies out there but i haven't really heard that one too much. im glad you enjoyed the other one.

whats a guess what? thx again anyway.

-crepth

It's all about CLASSICAL

>:(

Why all this classical... I like your electronica so much better. But you've got talent in this too, so I won't complain. Only thing outside the actual song is the title... You should at least have named it SOMETHING. Though many classical composers just call them (composition/symphony etc) (number) I mean, forget what I said I don't know wtf I'm talking about now.

I don't believe you recorded anything, did you? Cause most sampled instruments really lose their feeling when they are played at a high pitch. A bit how I felt now too. The only reason I'm pointing it out is that this is when it's played alone. When you have more in it it doesn't have quite that bad thing, the track as a whole sounds much better then. It blends into it and sounds just right.

The bass strings drown out a little when you put their volume and velocity down. Sounds very good in the start and through it. They almost rumble too, which is good. The notes are nothing to complain about, simple and superb

Well, these bass strings are playing notes that end and start just when the first do. Of course it works, but for a little more interesting mix you could try having a few short notes in the same range in the end of a note to get a bridge between the notes. And having the bass strings as is. Gah, I can't describe that in text... I need to make an audible example but ... >:(

Orchestral quicksilver filling... is good, takes the impression out of the orchestra hall into an orchestra hall in an oriental place. Yes I know it isn't really oriental instrument but it sounds so much like that. It makes atmosphere and made a feeling on me, which is good. So yeah, the addition was smart.

Ohhhh, here comes the piano! I love it. Sounds so melancolic and lonely, and yet it has this rich feel to it. The chords, notes and variations are cleverly done, and it comes and leaves just in the right time. The only thing I could see done better is if you added wee bit more reverb. Except for that it's excellent! The piano is essetial for this piece.

That's about that in the track, isn't it? There's some trumpets and brasses in here, but they aren't standing out enough for me to comment anything special on them. They sounds very good either way, and make some parts of the song sound very dramatic and exciting.

I'm quite dissapointed that you don't have any percussion in this though. Some huge, orchestral bass drums or gongs once in a very while could've done the piece sound more dramatic and/or moody. I believe your track is meant to have a sad feeling, like something or someone is lost. If that is so, you can forget the percussion comment.

Song is pretty repetitive. Nothing interesting or changing when it comes to structure, it's more of the same sadness repeating itself. You have a lot of interesting variations (especially hen it comes to the piano) in the track, but there's nothing that surprises or awakes the song. The song sounds pretty basic, and that is part of what's positive in it, sometimes simplicity is the best, right?

The track is overall a great composition. It has some points where it could have been better, but that is all just outside inspirations, add-ons and opinionated stuff. If it's awesome to you , nothing should be changed.

I'm nearing your awesomeness with this review, Karco :)
Gotta tell everything possible to do so though.

Karco responds:

Wow, long review, SBB! O_O Yeah, my electronic stuff is, I'll agree, just as good and I'm pretty much done with orchestrals for now. About the title... this song pretty much refused to name itself. :\ Any name I considered just wasn't right in one way or another. Yeah, I'd have named it something, but if nothing fits more, then nothing it is. ;)

It's such a HUGE review I'm not going to bother responding to it all... but it's all very appreciated and I might refer back to it while composing another. On the topic of realism... it, I'll agree, could have been better in places, but it wasn't really my focus in this song as much as it was to see what I can do with classical instruments, concerning composition and emotion. I think I did pretty well there.

Very little else to say but, again, it's a HUGE review and very appreciated. :D Thanks a lot, and glad you like it.

Hahaha

you get a five and all ten for that description... such a gentleman saying, turned slightly into a chatspeak quote :D

But anyways, this is good. Groovy, jazzy. Drums sound awesome when they come in, but turn annoying gafter a while.

Great sax, just the style a sax should have. Organ sounds a little too cheap old-movie ish, could need a medium to large hall reverb to fit everything else. Bass is good, though too low in the mix. Electric piano sounds good with the swirling thing on it, perfect velocity and all. The other one playing the chords was beautiful, kinda melancolic to the actual track.

The buildups and releases are all great, the actual song is fantastic. You have great talent! I wanna dance to it :D

preffertobedead responds:

well thank u SBB...u can Dance if u want...but check that no1 is watching..lol

Mmm

this is good. The tabla sounds very good, though it lacks pitch and changes in velocity, making it a little cheap

the thin plicky synth sounds good, kinda makes the thing sound like it's night. it gets a little out of order after a while, but it's good!

Good stuffy, keepy uppy

Suspended-3rd-Chord responds:

thanks a bunch man! appreciate it.

I'm using a soundfont for the tabla, so that's why there isn't enough pitches. I may experiment more with the samples I downloaded on the net or tabla synth in sytrus for the pitches. I definetly need to change up the note velocities a bit on most of my songs(its gets to be a bit tedious at times).

once again, thanks for the listen.

jazzy

but the guitar kinda took away that feeling and made it seem more gibber. no not gabber. Coulda been replaced with another something for ma taict

Great bass

Piano

Brushy drums

Funk, wtf no

Father-of-Death responds:

bla i thought it was jazzy too.....

but i asked one of my friends and he said it was funk...

but meh, it's kinda both i gues...

Tribute...

tribute to what?

The one thing I don't understand with IDM, glitch and similar genres is how you manage to push in so many random sounds into such few seconds of music...

The start is pretty awesome, could've turned into something really awesome experimental sound art if you went even more experimental with it. This is some crazy shite already though :D

The bass seems to be the only thing that keeps the song melodic- except for the piano-ish thing, but it's only there half of the time. Which is awesome :P

def and totle download

LJCoffee responds:

Thanks SBB,

"tribute to what?"
I dunno - I guess it seemed right at the time - still does I s'poze - I drew influence from a few of my fav. artists here on NG - and to be honest I'm not sure if you can hear any difference or not but I was thinking it at the time so I guess that vaildates it :)

"The one thing I don't understand with IDM, glitch and similar genres is how you manage to push in so many random sounds into such few seconds of music..."

It might sound that way I guess, but a lot of my stuff is much simpler than you might think. Often, I use polyrythms to make it seem like there's more going on than there actually is.

- An experiment you can try at home :)
create a few loops - use midi or dump wav's or whatever...

loop 1 - sparse rythm 4/4 time 2 bars
bass, snare and maybe a crash

loop 2 - heavily syncopated 5/4 3 bars
hats and a tom or two

loop 3 - 3/4 rythm with swing 5 bars
more hats and another bass - maybe abother snare for good measure

Now add them all in on top of each other for 16 bars or so and play it back... Neat huh? I'll bet it sounds VERY intricate but there really isn't anything incredibly difficult going on.

Now go back and change some of the timbres of your drums to whatever you want - screeches, yelps, scratches and twists...

Add a pint of vodka, shake gently and dump out your new wav. Now dump out another two or three variations, start chopping clips up - rearranging things where you think it might sound cool,
rinse and repeat as necessary.

Oh yeah the most important thing
- ignore everything I've said -
most of the time I don't know what the hell I'm talking about anyways :D

natives

this gives the feeling of walking arund in a cannibal lair or something, trying not to get caught and eaten :D

The percussion is really the main aspect of it, and you've made it sound very native and african style, at the same time the hats and very low kick sound much more like a drum kit, which is not really good for this song.

Some native instruments would sound good for this, it be pan flute, deep horn, didgeridoo or whatever, I don't know

TheOrichalcon responds:

I tried adding some melodies to it. But I found I liked the focus to be on the drums and the bass. Some tribal instruments could probably work though. I like the idea of a didgeridoo, I have a didgeridoo in my room which I can record for a later track.

scary shit

dude this song scared the living shit outta me :D

reminds me of some of my older stuff. creepy and subtle feeling, not really logical note progressions and tons and tons of textures and musical fx. The digitalizing of the atmosphere pad was very cleverly done, maybe my favourite aspect of the song. The piano could've been punched in at a few more places, for a lil more musical feeling.

Man these bird and cricket sounds make a really scary night feeling in the song.

shizzle

TheOrichalcon responds:

The scary "anything could jump out at you at any moment" sound is what I was going for. Glad you found the piece scary.

I didn't want to make it too melodic for fear of losing focus on the mood of the piece.

space jazz

very nice and gentle start with the driving acoustica bass ans jazzy rhodes. They flow very nicely together with the ambient beat and reverbed square synth. The reverse cymbal does good as a buildup for a new part, but it's really short and used in pretty many songs. Next up is a calmer part with a soft sawtooth lead. The melody is perfect and fits the lead choice very good, not too sharp and not too much like a pad. Your buildups with the gentle rimshots come in just when they should and the song continues as usual. That's proffesionally done.

djknightime responds:

Wow, such a detailed review! From the looks of it, you listened to it and wrote along. I'm flattered to hear that it sounds professional, since I consider myself only an amateur. I agree with your comments on the reverse cymbal, it is a bit overused. I felt appropriate when I was writing it, but I'll work on using something else as a buildup.

Thank you for the helpful review!

oh man

so low resolution... gawd it's killing

but this is some great industrial, the drums are really catchy and sound really lo-fi and cool.

the bass is good, but a lil cheeap bassline and variation. A lil empty on the percussion solo too. sounds a lil loosely put together.

anyways good stuff.

On-yX responds:

Meh, I think its alright, I could do better

welcome to bluegrounds :))

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