Buoy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kick clap hit]

Nah

It`s just a really short loop of drums. It could fit as a background template, but the drums alone are so empty and poor.
Also it`s really short. You could use some more effort and such in this.
Different patterns and tracks are needed.

BlackPlastic responds:

I think you are mistaken. You gave me a four.

[Destructo Loop]

A little bit fuzzy at times, maybe.

The fuzz there was really loud and the lead was like, insanely loud!
It`s a good audio track, but it ends fairly abrupt. You had good swithces between techniques, and it mixes into a nice audio track.
But, the leads are really loud. You could like to clean them out with some kind of disortion remover.

wizardman responds:

Yeah, the lead was way too looud. It was good when I did it and when I exported it, but apparently somethign hapened in betwee n that and the submission. I tried making it end not abrupt, but oh well. Thanks for the review.

[Jamie Killed Gibbers]

Oww

Man, this synth in the beggining was WAY too high pitched! My ears bleed of that. After that, it calmed down a bit, but I`m still in shock over that beginning!

The voices was nothing but 1 second of nothing.

But I like the riffs, and that other synth.
Could need some imrovement, but it works out, after all.

Sodium-Co responds:

And thanks again! Actually this stuff should no way be on here, I just got Fruity Loops yesterday and this was my first attempt at using it. Ah well!

[Dreamy Piano Loop]

fit for classical.

This is really not ambient, it`s classical.
Isn`t it unbelieveably short? It`s 10 notes in an averagely looping loop. It`s annoying to listen to such waaaayyyyy to long songs, and I`d like to hear it much longer.
It`s an OK piano, but it`s a lot of undertones which shouldn`t be there. You could have lowered the attack a bit and add a bassline.
Also, make sure you have proper song titles. If it contains the word loop or song, it`s quite sure it won`t be discovered.

Sodium-Co responds:

It doesn't loop properly either! ;-) But thanks for such a complete review!

[{Vespur Dust}]

Cool

I liked the beginning of this track especially much, because of the background ambience. I didn`t like the melody there, though. But when the dirty synth came in, I thought it got great. Also, when you added that pad, it got awesome.
The song slowly runs away, into an unknown land, it`s like what I`d think of it.
After a while the dirty synth got a *bit* too loud, and it spoiled the clarity, say, QUITE a lot.
I like the different melody patterns, so good work!
Just remember to keep them calm.

SineRider responds:

Sorry lol never noticed this review hehe

Bit of an old one

Could use some work now that I listen to it he. Thanks for the review

[~)final destiny(~ (game over)]

49 hours???

OMFG

aspachi responds:

lmao yes 49 hours. i didn't work on this one only for 49 hours but i mean three audio's i worked on in a total of 49 hours. it still seems a lot though but you know, i wana be carful what i put in my music otherwise you know.......DOWN VOTERS! anyway thanks for your review though it didn't really say anything =p

[Waiting (loop)]

HAVE YOU GOT IT INTO RECORDING?!?!?!?!?!

What`s happening? Did you record this? Because it sounds ALL too clippy and far-out. I really can`t say this was any good. It sounds like aliens blabbing to a really scurry but good melody.
Could use some work.

DJRaveR responds:

For some reason when I transfered it to mp3 it sounded like this, the FL version is way better. I don't know what happened, maybe its the bit rate cause its to much for it. Anyway, thanks for the review.

[Racing Fate (Full Version)]

Puff puff

I liked this quite a lot! Happy hardcore techno.
I liked how you made it sound like you used unproffesional instruments. Maybe clean out thte clipping throughout the song would be a good idea.

DJRaveR responds:

I dunno what clipping is, but Im glad you liked it. I added some drums into another version its to much the same so I haven't uploaded it. Woot.

[Chumpy]

no schitt sherlokk

Sounds really weird. But I do`t think this was especially hard.
Sounds like some semi-happy bland techno-reggae. I personally don`t like circus-music nor clap and clap music.
Some of the tracks are really off-tempo.
I can`t say I liked this. I`ll say a low 3.

DJRaveR responds:

ahuh... your one tough mofo to please!

Anyway, looks like if you want to listen to this you have to download it cause everytime I try and open it in FL it crashes and I don't know why. It sucks though cause it sounds good, yet a bit bland like SBB said.

[Techmo]

Well...

Couldn`t see anything very good nor bad with it, but it`s VERY highly disorted and insanely shimmering.
And it`s 30 seconds of nothing in the end.
I didn`t really like this one, it`s a bit too strung.

Tony11harp responds:

Yeah, I agree with you, I made this when i got the program to test it out a little