Hi
I updated the audio portal and out of sudden this song was there so
The start sounds pretty good, the piano alone is a classic but it works well every time. It sounds very good with the strings later on and the voice (which is scary at night)
I liked the turn-up in speed, which isn't recognisable if you don't listen good, it makes the track sound a lot better, more varied etc... the drums work well later in the song too, but they're less professional sounding in that part
I see you used the voice clip with the text in the descripton... it's not much of a statement... more of a "I don't wanna die" thing... The guitar makes a little contrast from the other parts, (choir and such) and it really sounds good too.
I loved the ending, it had a great melody and style, much like the rest of the track, but luckily you used something else for the ending.
good job also here's my dick