Overwhelming indeed
sounds like you took a speech out of somewhere without doing anything... you could always remove the noise but maybe you kept it there on purpose.
There is so much reverb here, the reverb makes a new pad which almost makes a melody, but not quite. Good melody, very nice choir, how'd you get it like that.
and look who's talking about abrupt endings. >8(
Lol almost a melody. I'm gettin slightly better. :)
Na the speach was created in speakonia with (guess what) reverb boshed on the end. So yes it sounds shit but i like it all the same. :D
The choir was just slowed down from a recording i found on my hard drive.
And as for the abrupt ending, WELLLLL EXCUSSSSSSEE ME. ( I suppose i was a bit hypocritical but i'll stand by my words.
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okay for the review I guess...
The piano in the start sounds like it's being played on the radio... or even like you recorded it from something else... what did you do with it. It'd sound much better if you made sound closer. The melody is good, I guess you're knowing how to play it well since you managed making a melody like this. It's smaking harmony with the rest of the instruments and melodies, but it's a little hard to go further into detail when the song is as short as this. When the strings come in it makes an impression of something huge forward on the song, so does the sudden snares (which might like some reverbitation and softening). But it never goes any farther than that point. I think you should continue on this one. It's really short. The end of it has a very cheap singe noted string, I'm surprised you didn't use a chord there, or at least made it a minor octave deeper.
eww long paragraph
Overall this is a great idea for a song, and a very good way to make drama into a piece. But I don't think this is enough as a whole song. I'm seeing it's a "bit" of your latest so I suppose you'll make it longer.
Woah, what? Crazy smiley. I suppose it's what I get when I haven't submitted for a month... (Actually, I think my name's pretty original. Would YOU have thought of it? :P)
The piano sounds like that because I filtered it that way. Don't worry, it's my composition.
You made the right assumption with "bit of my latest..." almost. This is actually the ending of a song that's more than twice as long which I'm not going to submit. It really doesn't do the rest of the song justice but stood well on it's own, so I thought I'd submit it.
Not much else to add... thanks for the review, SBB. :) I should be getting around to reviewing your two latest which I haven't reviewed in the near future, too...
I JUMP ON A BIG BANANA AND PUT MY DICK INTO IT
This is quite a good song! The snare thing is really overdone, and the pattern you had in it is so nonsense and irregular it's hard to hear anything in it. If you had it quite much lower in the mix it would sound better and allow people to hear the rest of it. Strings are good, they're making the job as a pad though it isn't. Most synths are good. The other percussion is really good and airy here I want to hear more of it plx kthnx
damn you have a lot of audio
Yes, I have a lot of audio, but all the good stuff is on the first page.
Thanks for the review.
or wat
You like playing up and down on a kind of synth or piano thing and call it a wave of sound don't you
AYE NUCKA YOU WANA FIGHT YOU LITTLE SPIK no Im just kidding your cool wanna come to my house and make bouncy bouncy sometime?
okay
a little bit unstructured, but it's good! Loved the changes in this song. A little bit trance mixed with much ambience and some orchestra. The parts start and end a little bit off each other, but that's the only hing I can see wrong in it. This is pretty long, which is good for this kind of song.
I dig for sure
(You know that the filesize of this is higher than actually possible? You're not supposed to be able to submit files over 4 mb but you actually managed to do it. :)
Thanks SBB for the lovely comment :)
I wasn't expecting one so soon.
I'm glad you like it. What do you think it needs to get it more structured?
(Haha...well on my computer, it shows less than 4mb, yet when I tried to upload, it showed more. Still allowed it though :D)
hmmm
Partial Birth Contortion how can that be.
In the start it sounded like a track that was NOT made by a mental pasient, but then it evolved to the same audio nonsense as usual.
The percussion is seriously remarkable here, it sounds almost like you never used the same fx twice, nor the same rhytm... except for that pad thing in the start and through the song.
or something I think maybe dunno really etc abc 123
This song smells of >:(
Now this be really angry (I should've turned my speakers down from max first). I don't know a lot about guitar etc but the start really sounds... wobbly... but else this is great stuff, really liked the drums here. loops excellent for being live recorded and mp3 too
Good luck in the contest!
(this is my 666th review >:O )
okay
so in the beginning it sounds like there's all these big fights and all. There's nothing wrong here, the mix and instruments generally sound good. Combination of all melodies are very good, there's nothing I can complain about. I loved the BIG percussion here, and it would probably work out with some very small fading out delay on it. After what I can imagine it would sound more epicismic. The only thing in this song I didn't like very good was the female choir, which sounds bare, and synthesized. All the other choirs are good
I'll do more later today k
My choir has never been that good, especially in the extremely high register (like C7), but it will have to do until I get EastWest Symphonic Choirs in five million years.
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