jeez...
now that's gotta be a long poem, lol.
this song I felt is actually even more dramatical than the other tracks you've made, maybe mostly because of the huge orchestral kick in it. Sounds pretty before-battle ish there, but it evolves into something that still is dramatic, but it doesn't have the same dark style then.
the start could have been outdone even more, and I mean the very start; aka lengthening the very first note on the string section and then go on on the note progression for the strings in the intro and finally release the rest of the track.
The choirs sound crazy good, but I can barely hear it through the strings. The second bunch of strings which play a much lighter meldoy are also of a very low volume, so for the flute. these instrument (in my opinion) should have a more significant role in the piece.
the super-light chime was obviously made several octaves too high-pitched but could've been removed entirely.
There I'm done with suggestions/critisism, I'll just say that this track IS incredibly beautiful and overwhelming, there's really not a lot that could possibly get better.
This track is really dramatic, but at the same time, it's incredibly slow and not overdone at all. It's a very weird mix which strangely suits this track perfectly.