haha
This is some of the most typical fl mess around, at least the beginning. A typical simple and not well constructed drum beat at all, then it follows up with a trnce ish melody.
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Well, the piano was the really good thing in this, it had a very good rhytm, totally following the beat.
And the trance strings are a bit too much alike the pianos, more like a very simplified decision of the piano than a real track in the song.
Keep stuffing up, but remember to get a lot more complexified beats. AND DONT FADE