...shit...
these ppl write tons of stuff with stories eh? what's up with everyone posting stories for ye >:(
>8C
I loved everything you had in there, especially the flute that was there in certain places (NEEDS MOAR)
But what´s that story between that thing we have here? Dude you should write a storybook on the bbs
Great track as always man.
Well I like stories, I appreciate every story that people post, it helps me wonder how the same sequence of notes and melody would invoke different angles and stories. Sometimes the results were so interesting, and others I kinda saw them coming. However since I can never really fill an image, only provide a guideline (sometimes even that is altered by the listener), I find it interesting to see how things turn out.
As for story book, I used to write a lot, I was in fact only a few weeks from finishing my second novel, but I guess somewhere along the way I decided to tell stories through music, and thats what i'm doing here ;).
Thanks for the review SBB, i'm glad you liked the piece!
yah
that has to be some of the most random piano playing ever, I don't think this qualifies to be an actual audio track... and that's mainly because of it's lack of rhytm, melody and these things... but well... keep trying
Shhh! I can't make music LMAO!
Well
I don't know if you should make a full song out of this... I culd see a nice synthie put int the next part or probably some organ since it's so orchestral and all... dude I dunno maybe if you'd use a lot of fantasy... since I would no way find ut what to maek out of this... but keep trying out stuff.
No u don't sux u r t3h roxx0r
I actually DID try continuing this song. I ended up by better mastering the drums, adding a bass line and inserting a calming yet eerie synth. It was turning into some kind of ambient, slightly-glitchy, experimental, down-tempo song with a choir. But anyhow, as I've mentioned in my reply to the review below, my computer exploded and all my data files for this song went *poof* so to speak. So this is probably the last and final version.
w00tie! I r0x! I r0x!
(I really need to produce and upload some new stuff.)
ahh well
Now I have this big list of people I really want to review once and I think I should review some stuff by you now.
Luved the intro, it is indeed a very great underwater track, and the thing with this is that it has so much in it which doesn't clearly come into the track, though it has a lot of stuff that is there.
I like the leads in this, which makes it a bit harder than if you didn't take it there. Good choice.
But I DIDNT like the fx bubble thing i nthis, you should have put rain into it instead.
Good stuff indeed but I will 0 it since it made me shiver of cold as Maestro sed
YOU DIDN'T LIKE THE BUBBLES!? Oh well, I only put them in there to keep with the the underwater theme.
And rain... you say? I don't recall it ever raining UNDER the sea, before. So I don't think rain would be well suited for an underwater themed song.
If it sends shivers down people's spines then I have done my job as an audio artist :D
Very nice
I love this track, it has a very good feeling to it.
I loved the structure in this song, and the parts in this are sure different but I think you intergrated them pretty well.
Great beats in this, though they only come in the latter part ofthe song.
everything with this track is nice really. ^^
(Do ye mind if I say I think you've used stompp)
thx, and no i dont mind, cause i didnt. thank you for the nice review though.
:D
hehe
it sounds kinda like listening to jazz out in space, which would be a VERY UNCOMMON FEELING and kinda scary too... some relaxing music in the far unknown?
But well after the jazz part is what made me smile, I loved the part with the blippy techno, it made the other parts of the song very well included with the string section, which was maybe some of the best synthified string work I've heard.
I loved the air choir. Keep the great work up.
Wow. Thanks for the time you put into listening and judging.
Hmmm
I wonder what the hell happened to your timing... it's kinda off tempo and not very catchy either...
But if you fixed your timing a little and had some more diversity in it I could see this track getting tons better.
The choir was great, could have been louder and a lot more dominant. The part where you made it louder, I was expecting something big, maybe you should've kept working...
Really nice track either way
thanx...i jsut threw it together really fast, TY for da review
Nice
This is quite more original than your others and really dramatical, but what happened to your mastering? It's really loud and it has tons of disortion too.
Good job doing this track tho, it sounds a lot more boss battle-ish than the original, and this thing is really much better.
kri
Yeah, I got kinda lazy with the volume. ^^;
Just wanted to get it straight onto NG. Glad it's more boss-y for ya. I shall sign of in pop-concert style!
"Thankyouverymuchand- G'NIGHT!!!"
Keep it up!
hehe
This doesn't exactly sound totally different from the original or your other version... you could really use some challenges... like,,, making a BOSS THEME out of the original mario theme... hat would sound damn great... I tried doing so with a forest theme, it went kinda good. Well, VGmusic has some boss remixes but try making the original something totally different with other tempo and such...
Geez, this song is great tho, there is a lot more power in this than the last version, and it's really catchy too.
(You wrote the name wrooooooooogn)
( (No dude, you should really make something out of the final Bowser Battle in Paper Mario) )
Final Bowser, coming up! Would you like fries with that? lol
I will try some "bossifying" ideas soon. Thanks
Keep it up!
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