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This is good, it makes me kinda think of running from some gay murders combining all their powers to rape you to death.
This one does actually get burnt a bit too much into your brain.
All the drums are good, diversed and complex.
Great fx and efx. Shouldn't have been there all the time though.
bah I'm running out of stuffz to seh
Hah. That's a new one. =P
By burnt, do you mean "stuck in your head to the point of sheer infuriation" or "stuck in your head to the point of going 'wow, catchy melody'" or do you just mean really, really high temperatures? =P Hah.
The drums I actually feel are fairly second-rate in this song... maybe it's just the sound of the FL defaults. Bah. I hardly use them anymore anyway. =P
FX and EFX? I don't know what you're talking about. XD Maybe it's the synth...
I don't mind that you're running out of things to say, though I do have one thing to point out - if you listen closely in the beginning and the big buildup in the middle of the song, you'll hear a bass/sawtoth thing going up in pitch up to the gunshot, and then it'll be playing a bassline-ish role throughout the rest of the song... bleh, that you didn't mention it probably means it was waaaaay too quiet. =P
Oh well - thanks for reviewing anyway. =)
catchy *WHEEE!* (loop)
Wooohoo! Should I finish this review?
Yes. XD
Yah
A very good song indeed. the start is really making it sound like you're going to get out on a big space journey, and the sfx coming then makes it complete, also it is a very good addition for the sound of this piece.
The background synths and stuff are great for this piece, but the melody the pad plays seems off-tone, and the order of the notes, and the notes, are not making harmony, and they doesn't sound melodical.
You could change the notes to one full note up and two down (I think that's what I'm thinking about), which would have made it sound really great, and also it would have made it sound more epic-ish-y.
The percussion in this is good at times, but I don't think clap only is good for percussion, even though it is only on parts. Yu should have the percussion much more exciting the whole track over.
'nuff sed. >:(
Yeah, I've experimented with the pads - everything, actually - and the song sounds a bit better - it has a slightly different attitude, too. I'll probably submit it sometime soon. In a day or two, maybe.
I'll look at the drums, too, but I don't see what's wrong with them. Maybe I'll have them fit the buildups a bit more, but otherwise they gave the feeling the rest of the song gives in my opinion. Hmmm.
Oh well, if it's still deserving of all 5 10's then you apparently think it's more than decent - so glad you like it and thanks for reviewing. =)
wooooot...
I never reviewed this song? blargh.
This is a fantastic trance-ish song, not as monotone as most trance songs.
I loved the upbeatness on this song, it has a lot of drive in it.
It sounds most like a kind of boss battle soundtrack or something on the boss level.
I can't understand how you ppl make your drums so damn good >:(
vote fiev
w00t Thanks SBB, sorry about the delay in response, I'm normally quick off the mark, but I've been a bit tied up with my "project" lol
Thanks man glad you like it
Peace Out!
Stealth
My gawd
I hear this kind of music too much in the Audio Portal- Trance and techno doesn't have any feeling- you should try having your own style.
But for a tranc ytune this is a good one, it has the usual nonsense melody which could have been made good if you took the effort that would take...
The drums are ok though they don't make the tune a lot better...
The only thing I don't like is that it is a so... overused genre >:-
but keep making music anyways.
lol! still, thanks anyways =p
Weird
The start is just as weird as it can get- it just comes in with a strange modded pad, and in comes my fucking TRADEMARK synth, goddamn it,
The song itself is relaxing and really good instruments choosed for that. but there isn't much more than that in it... except for a light bass synth.
I loved the piano you put in afterwards.
Keep it up, this is a great track!
thanks dude, glad you like it, the reason all the sounds are pretty basic is because it's one of the first peices i've done, towards the end of last year i switched from using a PC to a mac and for Christmas got Logic Pro 7 which is a fucking immense program, im just not that used to it yet, i've been using it at college as well, just takes a lot of getting used to and theres a lot to learn. also, it's not normally the kind of thing i would compose as i'm more of a rock based person, but i was feeling chilled out.
another thing is - there is more going on than you might think, not in terms of instrumentation, but in terms of form and musical characteristics and techniques.
the piece is almost quite minimalistic, which a lot of ambient music is, especially the original ambient music created by Brian Eno, he took reference from minimalist composers such as Steve Reich. the idea of it was that it was meant to be played quietly and with very little going on, which gives it the soothing "chill out" feeling. also, use of repetition gives this feeling aswell, where as too many changes stop you from relaxing, sometimes - Less is more.
the wave pad type synth sounds are also a soothing thing, they're generally quiet and build up slowly, if i used more sudden sounds, it wouldn't be as relaxing to hear.
another thing with this piece is that the bar lengths, if you listen closely, don't match up. i did this on purpose, and basically what happens is, they start in time and slowly go out of time, so some of the notes don't match up on the next cycle through the "melody" this keeps happening until they meet in the same place.
so like i said, there's more going on than you think, you just have to be aware of it to hear it. have another listen and see if u change ur mind.
thanks for your review dude
Dreamy
I loved the start- you should have kept the style! The pad you used is really awesome. The strings didn't fti.
wait... now it's coming some beats in! and it's catchy too! And there are more pads! the song is getting better! Actually it is VERY good now. The piano made it even better.
this song keeps the mix good, could like to see some mroe intense beats at some parts though.
check your PMs soon
Hmm. Maybe I'll remake the piece and keep the style somtime.
Yeah, I'm VERY proud of the percussion in this one. Same goes for the piano - especially towards the end of the song. Thanks again for stopping by to review... glad you like it so much! =D
addictive
The melody is catchy and keeps you listenining. I'm not so sure about the other parts though.
It was more like you mashed the piano with the deep tones, and it's way too loud too. The songs gets a lot of clipping becuase of this too.
The song itself isn't much since it is only a piano that's going. Keep trying though. Could have been a lot better.
Huh, it sounded that bad? It sounded okay to me. =\ Yeah, I do agree I might have made it a bit too loud. That was my first attempt at anything classical/instrumental with FL, though, so I wasn't expecting it to be perfect, either. Glad that you like it to some degree or another. Thanks for the review. =)
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This is one of the best tracks I've heard in the Audio Portal so far.
You used the Juicer, right? I love that synth. It makes the track so much more calm and warm. This gave me a warm feeling inside.
The rythmic synth you have in even gave it an industrial feeling, I loved the way you played it, sounds so hell of a lot better with it.
The cave effect is there, but I don't think it would be a crystal cave though.
The beat is good, doesn't need to be more diverse as it is just there to fill up space.
Great song man! I loved it SO MUCH. You have inspired me.
Haha, Big thanks man. I don't know if it sounds like I emulated Fruity Loop's juicer, but in fact I used Reason. Thanks for the review.
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