"worked a little bit"?
that's not good... you need a to work on everything you make... I work a lot on my tracks now that I begin getting better at audio.
Shouldn't you begin submitting longer songs? Personally I don't like loops that much... you should submit some songs over a minute man... I think you'd do good
As i see in your melody it has a lot of great in it, but the undertones, repeated undertones, they doesn't sound good and is what makes me kinda turn it off.
The drums are a bit cheesy and weak... you could need a tad of rhytmic music theory there...
Well- you're getting better